Whining

Whining dried eye sockets from imaginary losses conceived in the mind spilled tears in the murky soil forming ripples in the mud

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Daniel Turner

Date: 9/26/2016 11:43:00 AM

"Ripples in the mud" very powerful image, Mrs Nayda. Such deep expressions! Good luck.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/26/2016 2:43:00 PM

Thank you Daniel

Lu Loo

Date: 9/26/2016 7:24:00 AM

Oh nayda! This is so deep! One of my fave's that I've seen for this contest so far... Good luck I think Rick will love it ;)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/26/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Laura

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/26/2016 5:31:00 AM

Deep and nice ...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/26/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Probir