Whining

Whining

dried eye sockets from
imaginary losses
conceived in the mind
spilled tears in the murky soil
forming ripples in the mud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 11:43 AM
"Ripples in the mud" very powerful image, Mrs Nayda. Such deep expressions! Good luck.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Daniel
Scars Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Oh nayda! This is so deep! One of my fave's that I've seen for this contest so far... Good luck I think Rick will love it ;)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Laura
Gupta Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Deep and nice ...
Negron Flores Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Probir
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