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Whiners and Whisperers

I have little sympathy for constant whimpering Playing the victim and saying, “Woe is me!” With that self-conscious smirk of simpering The sort of thing that repeats itself annoyingly. Few things I experience will trouble me much I have little sympathy for constant whimpering, I find myself impatient with an unwanted touch And that kind of tete-a-tete of sly whispering In my presence, where I am constantly tempering, These are types of behavior I cannot abide, I have little sympathy for constant whimpering So, whiners and whisperers, don’t sit by my side. Give me that modicum of respect I have earned Observe polite decorum opposed to whispering In early childhood my father made sure I learned, I have little sympathy for constant whimpering.
written October 18, 2021

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Date: 10/18/2021 4:23:00 PM
I agree wholeheartedly with you, Milt. We have very little to whine or whisper about in comparision to others worldwide.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 5:39:00 PM
So true, Shirley. I'm afraid all of this whining and whispering is tearing our society apart.
Date: 10/18/2021 1:24:00 PM
I feel the same way "I have little sympathy for constant whimpering." Professional victims do not see a welcome mat at my house.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 1:35:00 PM
Oh, how I get tired of hearing about their victimhood. You know, Caren, I do believe that we are all victims from time to time, but to dwell on it forever and a day??? No thanks! I don't want to hear it!
Date: 10/18/2021 11:32:00 AM
So well said, love the line about playing victim have seen it all too often in blogs and comments:-( hugs Jan xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 11:55:00 AM
Yes, it is all too often, Jan. I agree wholeheartedly with Tom.
Date: 10/18/2021 6:50:00 AM
We have nothing to whine about especially when you see what others have to endure around the world. We should all be grateful that we live in a civilised society where we live in freedom. Tom
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/18/2021 11:44:00 AM
Well said, Tom & Milton! In a world clogged with millions of refugees, what god wants to hear trite complaints?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 8:11:00 AM
Absolutely, Tom. My feelings exactly!!!! Thanks for your thoughtful insight.
Date: 10/18/2021 5:42:00 AM
For sure. There is a difference in telling, and we can be compassionate enough to jolt someone out of their whimpering and whining if they are not looking for an answer. We must check ourselves too to see if we are patient but in most cases there comes a time for people to simmer down. Very well done, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim, for your thoughtful and insightful comment on my poem.
Date: 10/17/2021 10:01:00 PM
Very well articulated! Great write!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2021 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur, for your thoughtful comment.

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