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I'm aware of everyone's faults and downside. They will tear me since my life is now a façade. I was fully immersed in this level of self-love. Philanthropy is tied to being aware and sensitive. Everything was flawed, but I was "in the zone." Many people grasped my illusion and shone. We have hit obstacles in vast areas of quietness. Forlorn begets both activeness and idleness. My broken and weak lines have torn asunder. I was overwhelmed with blazing, imperfect anger. My final aim in ecstasy is to leap off something. The white mask implies that I wore it for nothing. My commitment was prompted by optimism. Dreams of virtue drove me to strive for idealism. You will be cracked no matter how firm you try. Even on brink of anguish, hope thrives and lullaby.
Written: June 17, 2021 Writing Prompt - Flawed - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/25/2021 5:04:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Flawed _ Challenge with your poem. Good use of the required words and your image is beautiful, peace _ Constance
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, dear Constance, for your thoughtful comment and for reading and placing my poem; when your comment came, I was working on the next contest, -Grasp- Blessings and peace
Date: 6/24/2021 8:47:00 PM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:31:00 AM
Ecstatic verses, idealistic imagery, dearest, Lasaad! Blessings my friend!
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thanks so much for your insightful, thoughtful comment on my poem, dear friend Demetrios. It is always delightful to get your opinion. My best to you.
Date: 6/18/2021 4:47:00 AM
You weaved the given words expertly in this fine creation, Lasaad. All the best.
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay. Your opinions are always important to me. My best to you

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