Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

While You See a Chance Take It

We can all sit and look back at the past
At relationships we thought ‘forever’ that sadly didn’t last
Time and tide will wait for no man
Just embrace life as much as you can
None of us know what fate will dictate
Grab every opportunity before it’s too late
One day our tomorrow will never come
Then it’s too late for things we’ve not done
Live life to the full don’t waste it away
And tell your folks you love them every day


Poem inspired by Darren Watson’s blog  ‘Why do the years go so fast’
Title taken from Steve Winwood’s hit  While You See A  Chance Take It.

Jan Allison
11th May 2014

Awarded 3rd Place in 'A poem you have not entered in a Poetry Soup contest  #1'
sponsored by Poet Destroyer A

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Robin Davis June 21, 2014 at 9:42 PM Jan Words of truth and wisdom told so elegantly and honestly. We shouldn't waste any minute of life. Thank you for the great comment on my Sparks Of Shocking Love Jan Allison June 22, 2014 at 2:17 AM The older i get the more I regret missing opportunities in the past - we need to make our children aware you only get one chance go for it before it's too late. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith June 6, 2014 at 11:07 AM I remember this piece Jan...beautiful...love and hugs Tim Jan Allison June 6, 2014 at 12:07 PM Thanks for dropping by Tim. i adore the track of music and was inspired by Darren's blog. hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta May 17, 2014 at 5:02 AM Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Jan Jan Allison May 17, 2014 at 5:59 AM Thank you so much for your kind praise Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2014 at 10:02 PM You were doubly inspired to do this one and you got a great win from it.BIG congrats, sweet jan. Jan Allison May 17, 2014 at 1:01 AM I was indeed Andrea. Thanks for the lovely comments. I'm having such an incredible time here can't believe its been just over 3 months feels like forever! hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 12:37 PM Love this one Jan...and I know it means a lot more to you for life is always there waiting to give us a wake-up call. We only live once. :) // paul Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 12:45 PM Thanks Paul for the lovely comments. Live each day to the full we never know what is around the next corner. Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxxx Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 12:38 PM .....and congratulations:)

Robert Lindley May 16, 2014 at 6:49 AM A fine write and Congrats on your win! Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 12:38 PM Thanks so much Robert. I was delighted with my placing of this poem am so happy :-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 16, 2014 at 1:56 AM Great poem Jan n such a merited win ! Congrats ! Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 2:25 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Dr Sharma. Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2014 at 12:11 AM Hey Jan, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 2:25 AM Gosh Linda didn't realise I'd got 3rd place - am made up! Hugs Jan xxxx Got to thank Darren and his blog for the inspiration for this one :-) Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2014 at 1:01 AM Ok Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 1:00 AM Thanks Linda for sponsoring the contests. Hugs jan xxx

Elvernia Russell May 15, 2014 at 2:13 PM Wow I read your poem and you are so right, it reminds me so much of my poem "when opportunity knocks". Great minds think alike. Jan Allison May 15, 2014 at 2:17 PM will dash straight by Elviernia and read. thanks for dropping by. Hugs Jan xxx

Mel Merrill May 14, 2014 at 1:04 AM Nicely done, Jan. And btw, I'm a big Steve Winwood fan--"Higher Love," one of the best dance tunes ever! Hope you're doing well...xxx...mel Jan Allison May 14, 2014 at 1:11 AM HI Mel thanks for dropping by -I was lucky enough to see Stevie Winwood in concert many years ago hes incredilbe! I love arc of a diver too. Wish I'd managed to see him when he collaborated with Eric Clapton - seen Clapton twice - hes a legend! Hugs as ever I'm still your Ironwoman lol Jan xxxx

Carrie Richards May 13, 2014 at 9:04 PM A message that we should all remember, every day is precious , too precious to waste! :) Nicely said ! Jan Allison May 14, 2014 at 1:08 AM thanks for the lovely comment Carrie. Hugs Jan x

Ivor Kos May 13, 2014 at 4:32 PM This is inspiring and motivational, I dare say. Elegant and admirably written Ellan Vannin Poem. Jan Allison May 13, 2014 at 4:33 PM Thanks again Ivo - I owe the inspiration to Darren Watson for his writing blog. hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2014 at 1:18 PM a gracious reminder to live well and stay in the now.. superb read, jan. huggs Jan Allison May 13, 2014 at 1:24 PM Thanks Nette for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley May 12, 2014 at 8:50 PM Wished I had that wisdom when a young man. For regrets I have aplenty'... Living a big and wild life will give regrets if it was truly wild.. A fine offering and enjoyed reading it.. Jan Allison May 13, 2014 at 1:03 AM thanks you for those kind words Robert. Hugs Jan x

Darren Watson May 12, 2014 at 1:20 PM I have no regrets about he past because I was such a little angel, lol Loved the poem Jan Jan Allison May 16, 2014 at 12:42 PM Massive thanks Darren for your blog which was the inspiration for this poem - will share the award with you. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx Jan Allison May 12, 2014 at 1:42 PM Yes I can see from your blog you had a shiny halo and it has never fallen round your ankles and I know now you are perfectly behaved now Mr Watson! Hugs as ever your friend Jan xxx

Saba Khan May 12, 2014 at 12:05 AM Yeah! very true :) Jan Allison May 12, 2014 at 12:55 AM thanks for dropping by Saba. Hugs Jan x

Arthur Vaso May 11, 2014 at 9:05 PM Lovely poem, and as much as I see a chance these days, I just cant, to many dam security cameras!!! Jan Allison May 12, 2014 at 12:54 AM LOL thanks for dropping by Arthur. hugs Jan x

Jack Horne May 11, 2014 at 6:26 PM such truth and wisdom here, my friend Jan Allison May 12, 2014 at 12:54 AM Thanks for dropping by with your comment Jack. hugs Jan x

Debbie Guzzi May 11, 2014 at 4:40 PM Very good advise! Light & Love Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 4:42 PM Thanks Debbie for the lovely comment. hugs Jan xxx

Ken Carroll May 11, 2014 at 3:43 PM A truly uplifting and enjoyable write.. Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 3:45 PM Thanks Ken for that lovely comment :-) Hugs Jan x

Evelyn James May 11, 2014 at 12:43 PM This is amazing, Jan, I especially loved this one, life is precious and shouldn't be wasted, dream of tomorrow but don't dwell on yesterday, lovely message Beth xxx Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 1:13 PM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Beth. I have to thank Darren for his inspiration both for this poem and the others we write together. Hug Jan xx

Mark J. Halliday May 11, 2014 at 10:58 AM Yes, embrace life, but don't be reckless or foolish about it. Don't just spend for today, but invest for tomorrow. I know that sounds boring, but... Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 10:59 AM Very wise words Mark. thanks for dropping by. Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian May 11, 2014 at 2:49 AM I agree, sweetie. .. Life is running its course and will not slow down. No time for regrets. Great write. Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 3:38 AM Thanks Eileen.for your lovely comments as ever .... watch out for our jadazzle page which is on its way with more new poems to come :-) :-) :-) hugs my friend. Jan xxx

Deborah Shiells May 10, 2014 at 9:26 PM Hi Jan, Your a kind one and I love this write my friend. Thanks so much for this endearing write, words of wisdom,written very very well. Peace, Deborah Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 3:36 AM Thanks as ever Deborah for your lovely kind words. Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith May 10, 2014 at 9:08 PM What a beautiful inspirational poem Jan,,,I adore your poetry...hugs Tim Jan Allison May 11, 2014 at 3:36 AM Aww TIm I adore your work too :-) Darren and I are currently setting up a jadazzle page so watch this space :-) :-) :-) hugs Jan x

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