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While your lips can still speak, say something sweet. While your legs can still walk, make prints with your feet. While your eyes can still blink, take in life's artwork. While you can still rise, do so with perk. 6-13-2021 Waltz Wave 1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1

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Date: 6/21/2021 4:28:00 AM
Superb. Such a wonderful message in such a short form. Much said in this little poem. All the best
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Date: 6/19/2021 7:15:00 AM
Worth a second read. Live the moment. Great advice.
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Date: 6/17/2021 7:02:00 AM
Juliet, I want to enjoy poems like this.., while I can. 'While you can ~ still rise, ~ do so with ~ perk.' -Richard
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Date: 6/15/2021 1:50:00 PM
I love the uplifting message in your poem, Juliet, and it marries well with this form! Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 6/14/2021 1:40:00 PM
Simple and poignant. Thanks for your kind visit.
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Date: 6/14/2021 6:55:00 AM
Brilliant writing. I love this so. You've accomplished a great feat with this verse and I love it so. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/13/2021 5:56:00 PM
A wonderful message here, Juliet, and within a difficult-to-execute form. Every minute we have is precious. ~ Sandy Dial
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:39:00 PM
Love how you did yours. it was a really good poetic message.
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