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While Watching the Dark Clouds

While Watching the Dark Clouds While watching the sky and its amazing dark clouds, I was lost for a while in the diffusing Sunlight, Coming from behind the engulfed Sun, Penetrating it somewhere, without much success, However, silently the Sun kept on trying and moving, In spite of all the dark clouds, Hovering all around it and were trying to fear the Sun, By their shapes and dark sings. But the clouds could not block the movements of the Sun, And its life giving light for more than Few moments. It assured me once again in my faith, That darkness can never be a A permanent fate. Sooner or later the light brings alive the life, Even if, it is in extreme darkness. Ravindra Posted on 04th Jan. 2011 Photo by Ravindra K Kapoor http://poetrypub.ning.com/photo/watching-the-dark-couds-054?context=user

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Date: 12/27/2011 9:04:00 AM
I love clouds in all their wonderful forms Ravindra, Your poem speaks so beautifully of them and then you give a deeper message within that fulfils the depth of this great verse. "That darkness can never be a permanent fate" is such a wonderful line. Thanks for sharing! :)
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Date: 1/11/2011 8:00:00 AM
Light in paint is the abscence of all color in light it is the prescense of all colors ;)/ dark/black in paint is the prescense of all color and in light it is the abscense! [I am having a contest featuring poets from outside the USA please add your skill, let us FEEL what it's like to live where you live?] Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:53:00 AM
I think both light and darkness are neccesary to appreciate and distinguish one from the other, Ravindra. A Great thought.
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Date: 1/4/2011 7:04:00 PM
I LOVE THE BEAUTY RAVINDRA, holding still to watch your words pass by with the best expression of yesterdays dark cloud.. I enjoyed the faith upon the light in your poem,, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:07:00 PM
wonderful write about my love, the sun. the sun makes the world go round!!! Very nice. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:30:00 PM
Special words of expression for a beautiful write Ravindra my friend... luv sooner or later the light brings alive the life.. a treasured line to bring quality to the entire poem... u have a special gift to create such lovely pieces my friend and hoping the New Year bring poetic quality to many of our creations as yours already possesses... enjoyed with luv this dramatic and extraordinary write with luv..
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:41:00 AM
And an excellent one at that...Enjoyed...Michael
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:42:00 AM
My first posted Poem of 2011
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