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While Storm Clouds Roll In

While the storm clouds roll in thunder breaks, as does my heart, with memories of what might have been if only we had chosen not to part. Thunder breaks, as does my heart. Rain pours down to hide my tears. If only we had chosen not to part, if only I could live with these fears. Rain pours down to hide my tears. I stand in the storm, afraid, alone. If only I could live with these fears, if only I could somehow atone. I stand in the storm, afraid, alone with memories of what might have been. If only I could somehow atone while the storm clouds roll in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/1/2011 12:58:00 AM
Hi Francine, I can feel your pain. Sometimes we have to go through the pain to feel stronger and better. May that time pass quickly. Take care Lee
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Date: 7/24/2011 12:55:00 AM
A sensitive verse Francine - you describe being alone with such feeling.
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Date: 7/20/2011 1:51:00 PM
very powerfull and a breath of empthy for you words, why the strom rages around find the eye of the strom as this will give peace and courage, love your work
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Date: 7/20/2011 12:23:00 PM
oh Francine this is not only deep but so emotional.. rain and tears are synonymous always and reflective to our emotions.. a great piece of poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 7/20/2011 11:38:00 AM
Soup mail answered and correction made on the contest page. Francine. Thanks you very much for the alerts.
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