While Riding a Paisley Tiger

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I collected the kinetic swirls
of differing shades
in the dizzying reflections
of how you made me feel

Whirling affects
blurred in calliope sonnets
and brass ring reachings
while riding a paisley tiger

My pockets filled
with these mesmerizing emotions
sculpted of Ferris Wheel desires
and carousel dreams of you

Until suddenly colored lights flickered,
the music slipped a gear
and the ride came to a screeching halt,
with me holding on for dear life

Flung to the floor between sneaker prints 
and paper cotton candy tubes
I watched you walk away with the stuffed
giraffe in your arms, it waved goodbye

While a checkerboard monkey giggled
as he emptied my pockets
leaving me with nothing
but a broken heart and a long walk home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Leiser Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 9:54 PM
What a unique way to write a breaking up story, Chris! Love the creative descriptions and original perspective! :)
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October 21, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Thanks so very much Laura.
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October 15, 2019 at 8:11 AM
...OK....report the guy selling the Cotton Candy....and get help. However, love and its loss will make you feel like the Roadrunner when it ends. Great write Chris....just the title is worthy of a read.
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October 15, 2019 at 8:13 AM
I'd just like to find the owner of that damn monkey. :) Thanks again my friend.
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October 14, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Wow, this was a special piece ~ so creative, great imagery ~ stunning, my friend! One to come back to, for sure! (a fave ;)
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October 15, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your support and kind words. Your comments and poetry are always something I look forward to.
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October 14, 2019 at 4:38 PM
i love the imagery, chris! you sure know how to paint a picture with words...
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October 14, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene. I am glad you liked this one.
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October 14, 2019 at 4:21 PM
this is so sad, heartbreaking actually...very unique and wonderfully penned though...the poignancy lingers long after the read.... hugs
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October 14, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so very much Sandy. I know this is kind of abstract, I just felt like posting something a little weird. : )
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October 14, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Very creative. How do you come up with these amazing lines Chris? What a great poem ! :)
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October 14, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I don't know, I guess they hang out somewhere in this weird brain of mine.
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