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The young fawns are frolicking on the lawn, nipping and jumping while they are at play and the doe, with her patience, watches on. If I remain quiet then they may stay. I just love this view from my deck today. The summer will be gone too soon I fear and with it will go my visiting deer. Francine Roberts 26/08/2011 for Dr. Rams "Rhyme Royal" contest picture attached

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Date: 9/6/2011 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Royal Rhyme" contest Francine. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your excellent win with this lovely Rhyme Royal.. exquisite imagery luv..
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Date: 9/4/2011 12:57:00 AM
Francine, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner's circle . Congratulations on your worthy entry. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:20:00 PM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Francine
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:01:00 AM
This is amazing. Simple and beautiful. Made me want to feel summer at ur place. And thanx for the honor I got in ur contest. Dinda :)
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Date: 8/27/2011 1:27:00 PM
I checked out the pic.. is kinda tinier than my not so good eyes can handle, but i got enough of the drift to feel the loveliness... remaining quiet is a high-level skill.. wish you the best in the contest.
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Francine Roberts
Date: 8/27/2011 2:06:00 PM
you can left click and save picture or set as background to enlarge it, then you will see her and the fawns clearly
Date: 8/27/2011 12:24:00 PM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Francine. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:53:00 AM
Thanks for the entry, Francine
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Date: 8/27/2011 12:40:00 AM
nice piece and best of luck.
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Date: 8/26/2011 11:21:00 PM
not 4 me the rhyme royal, silly billibales do recoil, all fun for me, it does spoil, so i will stay away... great poem though, i say...
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Francine Roberts
Date: 8/26/2011 11:38:00 PM
thanks Don, did you check out the attached picture

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