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While Guitar Sings and Dances

My guitar sings, swings, dances Those strings do-see-do; circle Left, right, then form a big square Tensions are released.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2018 5:56:00 PM

There is music and magic in your words..I can hear the soothing sounds that release the tensions. You are an artist, MLK.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:18:00 PM

Wow, thanks so much, Vijay.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/15/2018 7:18:00 PM

Nice personification - in a form which i new to me! We of NYC have invented a for 9 1 1 . nine syllables, nine syllables and 1 syllables. Good show! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:20:00 PM

911, that's really great; I you've taken a tragedy and turned it into something constructive; wonderful and thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2018 8:43:00 PM

The last line takes the piece o the perfect conclusion. I enjoyed this piece.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:30:00 PM

And that's just the way it feels when I play. Glad you stopped by Richard and thanks.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2018 8:13:00 PM

ohh, ML.. i'm so ready to dance to your tune!...lovely!...huggs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 4:04:00 PM

great word PLAY!!!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:29:00 PM

Many thanks, Andrea.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/12/2018 12:07:00 PM

Lovely... Do you play the guitar...It's my first and last love...yet to this day I have not mastered her...probably never will...she keeps me wanting...All the best M L Kiser

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:28:00 PM

Yes, I do play; I wanted to learn as a youngster and my Mom preferred that I learn the piano, so I play that, too but, I love the guitar more...you can't carry a piano to the park or parties or jams. The guitar does come in handy in that way. Play on Arturo and thanks.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/12/2018 11:53:00 AM

Your guitar gently weeps my friend...great dodoitsu M.L...love & guitars...^WW^

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:26:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2018 9:16:00 AM

Creative work. Enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:25:00 PM

I'm glad, thanks Sara.

Lyric Man

Date: 9/12/2018 7:59:00 AM

Love this.. I know my guitar is more human than many people. In my hands she breathes. And somewhere along the way, I stop playing her and she is playing me. Aww, the magic of music!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:23:00 PM

You must set those words to music; thanks again, Lyric Man.

Silent One

Date: 9/12/2018 7:51:00 AM

That is some guitar.. I would love to play the guitar, always had a fascination with it.. I used to have an old photo of me with a guitar, but seem to have lost it.. it was so poignant..

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:23:00 PM

I love the guitar because it's so soothing. Glad you stopped by to read adn comment.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 9/12/2018 7:32:00 AM

Right shoulder by right, nice