While Angels Weep

Lying awake abed and all slept out
I listened to the falling morning rain.
The pitter-patter landing in the spout
Made rhythmic sounds while flowing down the drain.
In vain I tried composing rhyme to it
Instead I found myself just mesmerized.
The drip, drip, tap, tap I must admit
Had totally rendered me hypnotized.
While in this early morning conscience sleep
An inner voice of mine began to speak:
You are a fool to think while angel’s weep
The muse will help you in the quest you seek.
When the rain stops and angels dry their eyes
It’s only then a poem can be devised.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Tugaff Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Kepp on sharing your talent. Ernilando
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March 11, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Great write here, love how you paint a picture and use sounds to enchance the scenes...Well done on this deserved piece being featured this week, keep penning, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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March 11, 2010 at 10:25 PM
This is Beautiful Albert! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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March 11, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
Mason Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Excellent writing/rhyming with this, Albert. Congratulations on your feature this week and keep up the wonderful contributions to our Soup!!
Mckenzie Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Albert~ This is clever Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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March 8, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Albert. Love, Carol
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March 8, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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March 7, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Russell Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Tis an inspiring hour when Angel's weep...very original,,,,keep writing.
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