Which Will Be Worst

Which is worse either pathetic poetry writer? Or a proprietor who has become a dieter Charging high rent who wants to slowly slip out of sight. Let's see you write a drastic poem about this subject Without any one else ever trying to infect And hope you have fun finding a craving For poetry and to do it away are now slaving. Make sure all tocks are preceded by ticks And that both of your eyes you firmly fix On a new poem you are about to deliver Making heart skip a beat and liver to quiver. So what do you think? Should I give up or continue on? James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet