Which One Came From Tennessee

We have traveled to thirty-seven states, the youngster told me.
He is only eight, so this is quite the accomplishment.
I collect one rock from each state, want to see them?
His mother rolls her eyes, as if it is no big deal.
It is a big deal to me; I am also a rock collector.
Sure!

He takes me into his room and pulls a box out from under his bed.
I imagine mica, feldspar, gypsum, glitters of bloodstone and the like.
He opens the lid. The rocks are gray, chalky, and gravel.
“Which one came from Tennessee?” I ask him.
He says “I have absolutely no idea, but aren’t they amazing?”
I think I’ll get him a bag of gravel for his birthday.
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Wolf Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 8:30 PM
For dessert, he can have a bag of sand. lol. Aint' eight great?!
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October 23, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Oh dear! I have quite a rock collection somewhere down in my basement. They are stones from various presidential sites I have visited. I have a brick from James Madison's home fireplace. They were remodeling and they said, "Sure take one of the original bricks!" I wonder how many others survived or who knew where they came from.
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