Which Is It?

Is the heart material 
or has materialism taken over the heart. 
Are we fickle because of modernisation 
or has modernisation taken over our souls?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 28, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Poetry Fathima-civilisation moderated?
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August 6, 2009 at 11:17 AM
In my opinion, the later, to answer the question your poem presents. Just my opinion tho. Your poem is thought provoking, for humanity to ponder. Sincerely Moses
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June 15, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Maybe some hearts are. But are we fickle, probably. Thought provoking. Love, Shar
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June 15, 2009 at 12:30 AM
It's enjoyable... and definitely a ponder. I would love to see this poem grow and expand! There's a lot of potential and I want you to write more !! xD it's greaT! good job. =3
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