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A few alterations today 28th june 2024, that work better than i first thought When putting this down.' So originals are best.'
I write to water the 'seeds unknown' which the broken Body of Truth has sown, through unlikley servants with Unclean hands. Who require renewal from the one God Man..' against contrary winds that chance' and smiling Demons that flit and dance, cajole and offer yet? That Condesend in pandering messages by air they send.' So much to offer! they'll fix you well.' They've a cure all It involves sin, delivered by drug you can share that win? You only have to have' ( the need ) a hunger? Some greed? Just always know you are important.' Until something Comes! and changes (that format!) You'll find theres not Another chance you must continue on in satans trance Kiss under the green of a 'cancer on trees' right through Christmas and old year leaves.' Just embrace tradition till The pagentry ends, the glitter has worn' Well? like drunken Bad friends..Yet amidst the turmoil.' the churn, and rush' Jesus is real you should know that much' his armies are Mighty! in His name, call out for renewal and He will send' 'less blame' Don't Chase the empty and dark cold winds, as flattering tounges in hell will recind..' No light of Creation there you'll Find! yet evil upon evil, your soul will bind.'

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Date: 6/27/2024 3:12:00 PM
inclusive thoughts from a sensitive heart...finely rendered, joe!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 6/27/2024 3:16:00 PM
What else can be articulated Nette, Gods Love is crucial for Real value in life.' Thank you for Looking in.'
Date: 6/26/2024 8:30:00 PM
"No light of Creation there you'll Find! yet evil upon evil, your soul will bind.'" Early on, in my journey to follow in the Service of Christ, I was told never get too comfortable in one's own sense of skin. The further along the path, the more subtle are temptations, the more inconspicuous the devils deceptive persuasions. Let God's word be our safeguard, our saving grace. Interpretation of scriptures can vary, but I have found that, Truth is indeed self evident. Truth lives, rings true outside and beyond the text. If I have to convince myself of something, give a lot of internal debate as to why and how?...it is probably wrong. A meaningful reminder. God's will...never ours. Thank you, Joe.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 6/26/2024 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Joe Dimino.' For your Thoights and insights its good To read you here today!

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