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Which Device For You

One is nearly two hands wide The other's rather long and thin The first is somewhat limiting The second, variety's built-in One if often black or gray The other's a rainbow of color Yet both do get their point across One way or the other The first just asks a finger's touch The second you get to steer so much The first gets sloppier as you gain speed The second'll go as fast as you need Your pen or a keyboard: Which is better It depends. Are you drawing pictures ~ or making letters

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Date: 5/23/2019 10:27:00 AM
I agree with Michelle! (whew...did not know where this poem was going!)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/23/2019 12:48:00 PM
Ha, ha. I wrote the poem, and I had no idea where it was going either (when I started it). Appreciate the interesting feedback. Happy Thursday! :) gw
Date: 5/22/2019 10:43:00 PM
A pen and paper for first drafts, but keyboards sure are handy for quick posting to certain creative writing websites!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/23/2019 12:47:00 PM
Can't imagine life without keyboards anymore, can you? How about posting accounting entries in a monster corporation in via fountain pen in a large leather-bound ledger? Seems like caveman days to me! Thanks for the view and the viewpoint, Michelle! ~ gw

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