John Loving Iii Poet Light Verse

Which Are We

my cyber romance 
is it hope or is it a dream
hope is a posibility 
and a dream is an imposible thing
hope means your willing to try 
something for which you may even die
but a dream is something that sometimes just drifts by
a figment of our imagination
where as hope has a destination
a dream satisfies our daily lives
it occupies our mind with lies
seeing things with the inner eye
escape from bordoms paralised
to enjoy the little things we choose
with the one our lust would  use
satisfy our restless minds
with a dream that takes our time
and makes it into something not there
faces, wishes, love affairs
but hope is a thing that lives
more than just a dream it gives
it produces an opportunity to earn
to seek the obtainable not just yearn
my cyber romance
are these words of hope just a dream

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Anne Rutherford May 2, 2011 at 6:21 AM Wish I could give you two sevens for this wonderful poem John. Very well written. Anne

Charles Melody Lightning Ink February 18, 2011 at 8:04 AM John where are you? i can't find you around.

Phyllis Babcock January 31, 2011 at 8:47 AM Love is cyber space can be an illusion and it can fill a void in your life for a while. I think when reality comes in to play you must meet that person to know if it is real or not. love phyl

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2011 at 5:30 PM Good one John...One has to get together with that cyber space person at some time to really know if it is the real thing.I wrote one about "Internet Love Affair" but I was really talking about being in love with the net itself....Sara

Elizabeth Lindsey January 24, 2011 at 3:34 PM very good. So i have a question the poem you commented an that you said was singable is it really? I'm only 15 an just want advice. Thank you, -Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2011 at 3:26 PM wow! one can get lost in the romance.. and only end up with sadness.. i envy your search.. i sure wish i had it.. but i live in reality world now... lol.. called phone calls and text messeages... but i get none... since i'm always busy.. i really wish i could go back to 3 months ago.. when i was lost in cyber.. in a dream .. love it John... thanks for sharing.. and a super shout out " WOW",,~luv~p.d.

Audrey Haick January 23, 2011 at 2:34 PM Written in wisdom and truth! Always, Annalise

Charlotte Puddifoot January 23, 2011 at 8:45 AM hope springs eternal...

The Situation January 22, 2011 at 10:03 PM your a real pro. i like what you do with words. T.S.

Carolyn Devonshire January 22, 2011 at 7:37 PM Dear John, your poetry just continues to get more and more profound. How true it is that "hope...produces an opportunity to earn...not just yearn." I have tried to find love in cyberspace and find myself lost in illusions. People often misrepresent themselves. Excellent writing, my friend. Love, Carolyn