Whether Or Not

“whether or not”


two days without walking,
and without out loud talking.
have i gotten lazy,
or have i gone crazy;
complaining, when’s the rain going to start stopping?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 30, 2023 at 12:40 AM
Hi Jeff….great poem especially the last line “start stopping” hehe! Debx
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September 30, 2023 at 1:04 AM
Thanks for noticing that Deb, and thanks for reading and commenting
Situation Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Your in the moment. Get out!
Connelly Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Too late. May day! May day!!!, but thanks for the comment
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