Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Wherever I Am Complete the Lines

Wherever I am, the world comes to me
Birth of life on bended knee like a breeze to be free
The   heavens   and seas rejoice with glee 
Carrying the world on their shoulders to regrow
With each breath taken holding say goodbye to tomorrow
Letting go of the shadows and moving on to dream and grow

By: Eve Roper 7/26/2015


Line 1: ‘Wherever I am, the world comes to me.’---Mary Oliver

Contest Name: COMPLETE THE LINES! 
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2015 at 8:53 PM glad to see this one again, now on the winners' list. Congrats, Eve.

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2015 at 1:30 AM your sentiments leap beyond each word, eve... special congrats and thanks for being part of my contest! Eve Roper August 5, 2015 at 11:39 AM Thank you, Nette, for placing me in your contest it real put a smile on my face:~) Hugs sweet friend

Laura Leiser August 4, 2015 at 12:44 PM Congrats on your win, Eve :) Eve Roper August 5, 2015 at 11:40 AM Thank you, Laura, for your support and your congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend

Paul Callus August 4, 2015 at 9:34 AM That first line served as a launching pad for 5 more beautiful lines, Eve, especially the concluding one! ~ Congratulations! hugs // paul Eve Roper August 4, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thank you, Paul, for your compliment and your congratulations and your mentoring, please always feel free to correct me to make my work better. Hugs Dear Friend Eve

Tammy Reams August 4, 2015 at 8:58 AM Wonderful Eve! Congrats on your win! Eve Roper August 4, 2015 at 10:07 AM Thank you,Tammy , for the compliment and congratulations . Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2015 at 12:56 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Eve! Wonderful imagery! Eve Roper August 4, 2015 at 10:07 AM Thank you,Dr. Upma A. Sharma, for the compliment and congratulations . Hugs Eve

Skat A August 4, 2015 at 12:46 AM Eve, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT** Eve Roper August 4, 2015 at 10:08 AM Thank you,Skat , for the congratulations . Hugs Eve

Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 4:53 PM Beautiful lines Eve many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper August 4, 2015 at 10:06 AM Thank you,Jan, for the compliment and congratulations . Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2015 at 7:17 PM Nicely done, Eve. You picked a great first line to go off!! Eve Roper July 27, 2015 at 7:23 PM Thank you, Andrea, for the compliment I truly was not too sure of what to do. Hugs Eve

Njeri Hunjeri July 27, 2015 at 5:08 AM Wow, superb piece! all the best Eve Eve Roper July 27, 2015 at 7:24 PM Njeri, thank you for the inspiration compliment. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux July 26, 2015 at 8:38 PM Great lines in this one Eve! Eve Roper July 27, 2015 at 7:25 PM Thank you, Richard. Hugs Eve