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Wherever I Am Complete the Lines

Wherever I am, the world comes to me Birth of life on bended knee like a breeze to be free The heavens and seas rejoice with glee Carrying the world on their shoulders to regrow With each breath taken holding say goodbye to tomorrow Letting go of the shadows and moving on to dream and grow By: Eve Roper 7/26/2015 Line 1: ‘Wherever I am, the world comes to me.’---Mary Oliver Contest Name: COMPLETE THE LINES! Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 8:53:00 PM

glad to see this one again, now on the winners' list. Congrats, Eve.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2015 1:30:00 AM

your sentiments leap beyond each word, eve... special congrats and thanks for being part of my contest!

Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, Nette, for placing me in your contest it real put a smile on my face:~) Hugs sweet friend

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2015 12:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Eve :)

Eve Roper
Date: 8/5/2015 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Laura, for your support and your congratulations :~) Hugs sweet friend

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2015 9:34:00 AM

That first line served as a launching pad for 5 more beautiful lines, Eve, especially the concluding one! ~ Congratulations! hugs // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 8/4/2015 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, Paul, for your compliment and your congratulations and your mentoring, please always feel free to correct me to make my work better. Hugs Dear Friend Eve