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Where Your Mind Takes You/Can You Feel Me?

Can you feel me? Can you feel me as I reach out to you? Although not a physical touch... Can you feel me as I taste your every desire Yes....I can play on your emotions A mental tease Make love to your mind Lurking through your sea of thoughts......Can you feel me? Did you feel it when I took your heart as if it were mine? Did you feel it as my words captivated your mind, body, and soul? Did you feel it when the "thought" of you took me to a place I've NEVER been......Did you feel it? Can you feel me as my chocolate soul wallows around in your every desire? Does it seem real? Does it feel real? Does it feel real as my hands explore this beauty of a woman? Does it feel real as you fantasize? Visualize what you want as real.... Its wild to feel what you feel Cause When its in your mind its not real..... or is it????? Just let go Take that ride to.............Where your mind takes you

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Date: 1/3/2016 7:17:00 PM
Nice work
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:36:00 AM
Captivating write this! I love how you've used questions to draw out the recipient - the words flow very smoothly and make for a very pleasurable read. Very well penned Amanda!
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