Where Would I Be?

Where would I be without you?

Would I really be on the path that I am now?
Or would my path be a different one
Would I have a straight head on me?
Because it’s easy to fall short where I’m from 

Never ever stopped me from doing wrong
Just let I and my conscience know
That it was wrong and I shouldn’t do it
And I think that’s what made me grow

Watching and following how you 
Would tell me to take annotative and think 
How you accept me like a brother
And wouldn’t dare to let me sink

At the same time you were there for me
No matter if it was right or was wrong
And always stayed by my side
While having my back all along

Every time I called you answered
And you, I would literally give an arm and a leg
 And for it all not to change 
To you I would plead and I would beg

But change is inevitable
Its one of life’s many laws 
But I pray that it doesn’t change 
And for that I pray to God

Though we fight and get critical on a daily
And at times we can be hurtful
Know that only you can get to me
Because you’re already in my circle
But I refuse to let anyone else 
Get to you in any uncomfortable way
And I really mean that with my heart 
And not just with these words that I say

And with these words that I speak I would like to say I LOVE YOU



To my friends those who help me stay on the righteous path that my parents put me on and I love them for that and also thank and appreciate them for what I have learned from them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/12/2008 12:47:00 PM
Dear Trey: This is a beautiful poem. Thank-you for reading my poem forevermore. Try Destiny, my first and best poem. Love, Janjan xoxo
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Date: 7/12/2008 8:03:00 AM
Trey - Friends who help us stay on the right path are the dearest of blessings - your poem was full of heartfelt sentiment - wonderful poem
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