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Where Would I Be?

Where would I be without you? Would I really be on the path that I am now? Or would my path be a different one Would I have a straight head on me? Because it’s easy to fall short where I’m from Never ever stopped me from doing wrong Just let I and my conscience know That it was wrong and I shouldn’t do it And I think that’s what made me grow Watching and following how you Would tell me to take annotative and think How you accept me like a brother And wouldn’t dare to let me sink At the same time you were there for me No matter if it was right or was wrong And always stayed by my side While having my back all along Every time I called you answered And you, I would literally give an arm and a leg And for it all not to change To you I would plead and I would beg But change is inevitable Its one of life’s many laws But I pray that it doesn’t change And for that I pray to God Though we fight and get critical on a daily And at times we can be hurtful Know that only you can get to me Because you’re already in my circle But I refuse to let anyone else Get to you in any uncomfortable way And I really mean that with my heart And not just with these words that I say And with these words that I speak I would like to say I LOVE YOU To my friends those who help me stay on the righteous path that my parents put me on and I love them for that and also thank and appreciate them for what I have learned from them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/12/2008 12:47:00 PM
Dear Trey: This is a beautiful poem. Thank-you for reading my poem forevermore. Try Destiny, my first and best poem. Love, Janjan xoxo
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Date: 7/12/2008 8:03:00 AM
Trey - Friends who help us stay on the right path are the dearest of blessings - your poem was full of heartfelt sentiment - wonderful poem
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