Where Were You In the Seventies

Early 70's suffered from post puberty traumatic stress
running to the school bus stop my belongings a mess
at times missing the bus and walking to school
enjoying my time alone and the suburban view

Graduated from my NY high school in 1975
worked a variety of jobs I was staying alive
took advantage of my typing and became a clerk typist
driving on the LIE everyday getting stuck in traffic

Went out dancing a bit with friends at times
working by day and trying to find the right guy
the Vietnam War had ended which was great
then onto gas shortages and the televised soap opera Watergate

Lived at home for awhile and paid rent to my parents
a blue collar working girl whose low salary was apparent
would have loved to have been more like Mary Tyler Moore
with my own apartment and friends knocking at my door

That decade on Long Island I had my share of ups and downs
a little flighty female trying to find my way around
a realistic dreamer trying to row merrily along in life's stream
on occasion putting my oars down conjuring up new dreams






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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/11/2018 10:17:00 PM
Long Island Expressway??? I lived in Forest Hills Gardens, took train or subway to garment district. I had trouble with computer and didn't enter, and really admire you so much for entering all the poems I just read from your recent submits. Thanks for encouraging me. bbn
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/12/2018 5:18:00 PM
Oh wow, I had an Aunt Stella who had lived in Forest Hills for awhile and sounds like you had an interesting career in the garment district! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Barbara; sorry you experienced computer problems and missed this contest! Thanks for the stop by!~Che :)
Date: 3/2/2018 9:58:00 AM
I especially like the last line. We all need to dream and dream big with some of those dreams coming true. Sara
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/3/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Sara; glad you enjoyed my poem!~Che :)
Date: 3/1/2018 7:25:00 PM
This is such a great recap write of your life in the seventies :) Loved your reference to MTM... I was little in the seventies but remember it to be a "groovy" era!...time marches on...have good day :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/1/2018 7:52:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Chris; you are probably about my younger baby sisters age I'm guessing! It was kind of a "groovy" era and also kind of confusing with all the crazy things going on! Time does indeed march on…have a great night and weekend!~Che :)
Date: 2/25/2018 7:06:00 AM
Nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/25/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ravi; glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate the stop by!~Che :)
Date: 2/23/2018 12:24:00 PM
I was born im 76 so missed most of this decade.. Enjoyed your take on the contest..
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/23/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; really appreciate the stop by!~Che :) PD I have a niece the same age as you! :)
Date: 2/23/2018 7:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your fulfilling poem, Cheryl ...
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Date: 2/23/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank so much for very kind comment and visit Probir; really appreciate the stop by!~Che :)
Date: 2/23/2018 2:16:00 AM
Can't believe its nearly fifty years ago.Frightening isn't it. Great verse Cheryl. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; it is frightening in a way! Really appreciate the stop by!~Che :)
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