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Seth Pina's Favorite # 5 Contest

Where We Are


It is the grey of evening...soft lamps glow as our hood readies itself for some crumbs of comfort: Old widows wrap themselves with pillows for third- hand affection, Children yawn sure as rain that mothers will lullaby them like so , Single fathers brew coffee to tide them from a hard day's sweat- Senior men listen to music begging for new memories... Young ladies lonely shut off their doors... praying Psalm 91, It is evening. This is where we are...getting older in wisened thoughts , to gather slivers of reflections, of dreams met and unmet... Icy winds shiver a bit asking: how will we savor to the pulp, this one beautiful life possessed? And the light shuts off.
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Beaufort Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 5:23 AM
Nette, you've written a thought-provoking poem on the meaning of life. As you point out, it's all we have to savor. We get to our end rather quickly and hopefully can deal with it constructively and with some peace of mind. When I first read this my brain saw "old windows" instead of "old widows." It had my brain stressed for a while because I thought there was a hidden meaning....so my brain is getting old too (lol)!
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 1:10 PM
wow, I love this, Nette. Congrats on a well deserved win. A fave
Agustin Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 1:27 AM
Wow! Congrats! Ang ganda... ang galing!!! Thanks for sharing your talent, Kabayan! Thanks likewise for your uplifting moments. God bless you.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 10:12 PM
Lovely writing. Enjoyed. God bless you and congrats, love, Gina
mysore Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 9:56 PM
'Pain of senility/ getting older in wisened thoughts'- so well written dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
Parker Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 3:44 PM
I believe I'm old enough to have lived your poem, at your age this is wisdom from someone with an old soul...Nette
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 3:25 PM
It is all part of life on this earth.
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