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Where Two Once Stood

Where two once stood, now one alone Left to journey on their own Gone the love they chose to share Dashed in the ashes of despair A heart now turned to stone How for this loss will I atone Survive without the love I've known One broken heart beyond repair Where two once stood The petals of our love have flown Upon deaths winds loves seedlings sown The remnants of a life stripped bare One lonely soul still standing there Where two once stood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/4/2012 7:47:00 AM
wails the moon, bob.. a sad yet hauntingly beautiful sense of grief and nostalgia... superbly done in a form quite difficult to undertake..:) huggs
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/14/2012 8:46:00 AM
thank you so much nette
Date: 10/28/2012 10:20:00 PM
Oh boy, this is sad, but poetic.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/14/2012 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Sherese.
Date: 10/15/2012 8:30:00 AM
wow. very powerful piece! The sadness, loss, and lonliness, overwhelming. described perfectly.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/22/2012 10:05:00 AM
Thank you BES. Much appreciated
Date: 9/26/2012 8:58:00 AM
Old times, writer, old times, romantic age, I see them in your work, words and style...... Good work
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/26/2012 11:35:00 AM
Thank yo Chidozie. Much appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2012 10:37:00 PM
A wonderful poem and very well written.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/25/2012 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Jon
Date: 9/24/2012 2:31:00 PM
this is a beautiful but very sad poem. lovely!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/24/2012 2:55:00 PM
Yes, it is a bit melancholy. Thanks for your comments Ilene
Date: 9/24/2012 12:27:00 PM
Such a heartfelt poem Bob!Love it!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/24/2012 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Kash. Much appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2012 12:21:00 PM
Wonderful Rondeau! Absolutely loved it! :) Tanya
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/24/2012 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Tanya. Glad you enjoyed it.