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Where Translucent Pure Did Run

The day has finally arrived, my eyes now drawn to see Amidst her season of winter I view whats in front of me Crimson red now seeps, where translucent pure did run I'm starting to feel the worst, has humanities end began Slowly I watch it rise as it covers her virgin white Dark woods are becoming bleaker, this 2012 December night How can I stay awake, how can I go to sleep When I view this continual seeping, all I see is bleak All through the night it continues, sweeping across the land Is this the work of the writings, the Mayan Prophecies planned A new dawn appears, I honestly can't believe my eyes It's as if the worlds on fire, the land now matches her skies The oranges reds and yellows, give way to her normal blue But why does her surface bleed, when above it appears so true http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-10.php

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Date: 12/16/2011 11:49:00 AM
Love the color of the sunrise, I feel the wonder of what you see in this verse. So special!
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Date: 11/23/2011 10:54:00 PM
Enjoyed this reflective and searching piece James,, i shall come back to this again i believe..!
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Date: 11/23/2011 1:42:00 PM
Yes, this makes me feel the uncertainty that has been inside me for a while already, James. I think many strange things are lurking beneath the surfaces of what we view. HEy, I see you got your avatar going. I have no idea which file thing to download. None of them seem to work. Any suggestions for me? There are pics over at Facebook I could use. How do I get them?
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Date: 11/21/2011 1:31:00 PM
Hopefully it is the beginning of an even larger [than they could imagine] cycle! but I will be in Machu Piccu waiting wanta come? LIght & Love
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Date: 11/20/2011 6:08:00 PM
Very work about the unsure future...Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/20/2011 6:09:00 PM
I meant very good...SK
Date: 11/20/2011 4:15:00 PM
What a visually stimulating trip! Intertwining the Mayan prophecies as a potential source was very clever also. Your couplets dance together so nicely...I must check out this website next.....Gwendolen
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