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Where To Be

To strech beyond the endless sky, with no baggage of guilt to carry, spread the wings, just aspire to fly, no wants, no cause for worry. To plunge beneath the deepest ocean, wearing a suit, a mask for sight, tearing shoal of fishes' motion, and bury many a trivial fight. ironically,today I stand firm on the ground, attempting to connect the future to past, No wings to fly, No fins to drown, wondering, am I in this place miscast ?

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Date: 9/11/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:49:00 PM
Anusheel Pandey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:38:00 PM
A P.,, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:16:00 AM
I like how you ended this poem w/a question - it gives it power. Also, this piece flows very well and comes alive with your vivid imagary. Well done. WRITE MORE!
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/28/2011 1:12:00 PM
Thanks for the encouraging words Susan. Glad you liked it.
Date: 6/27/2011 8:02:00 PM
very interesting thoughts in this one and reflecting on places you would rather be . WE all feel like this sometimes I think.
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/28/2011 1:11:00 PM
Ya Andrea, we all want to bury the negativity that surrounds us, the unnecessary worries and fly like a free bird, lead a peaceful life.
Date: 6/25/2011 12:43:00 PM
A great way to be alone and expressed so beautifully.
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/28/2011 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth.

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