Where Time Removes Its Shoes

I stand where gold remembers prayer,
where quiet climbs the edges of the sky.
The temple does not speak--
it listens… and so do I.

The day starts quietly here,
stone looks worn but steady.
I stand off to the side - away from the light,
and stand there longer than planned.

Nothing is hurried.
not the steps,
not the heart,
even time removes its shoes.

I stop.
I stand there.
A small smile comes,
nothing planned,
nothing for show.


written _12172025_BKK
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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December 20, 2025 at 6:04 PM
something powerful in not rushing...being in the moment. Powerful words written by a genuine soul!
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