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WHERE THE WATER TOOK IT

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The river didn’t ask what I was rinsing off~ it just moved, warm and carefree, around my wrists. I knelt there long enough for the current to forget the shape of my hands, for the silt to swallow whatever slipped from my fingers. And when I stood, dripping and empty, the sun didn’t hiss sinner~ it just dried me, quiet as a pardon. Now I walk lighter, puzzled by the lack of weight. Where is my guilt? Where is my shame? The answer’s simple: Confessed~ Gone downstream, turned into stones, into minnows, into nothing.
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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 7:27 AM
Beautiful ~ cleansing our soul is all about intention
Hind Avatar
January 27, 2026 at 6:57 PM
A fav. FAVE This speaks a lot to me.
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