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Where The Sun Don’t Shine 

Written - 20th April 2026

Where The Sun Don’t Shine

When I ask folk where the sun don’t shine I get funny looks every time So I have to repeat I cant stand the heat When I’m in a naturist retreat. * * *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 9:01 AM
Lol! That's too funny.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Victor, though it’s not funny when one is burnt to a crisp all over… Beryl
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 10:48 PM
Haha. What a place to be. The sun shining on everything. I am enjoying what people came up with for this fun contest
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Thank you Andrea. An all over tan, can’t beat it… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 4:59 PM
clever...enjoyed....best wishes with this contest entry :-) hugs, Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:53 AM
Thank you Sara, you’ve gotta have a laugh. Hugs returned… Beryl
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 4:02 PM
LOL
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:51 AM
Thank you Paige, pleased you got a laugh from this Limerick… Beryl
Flood Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 3:42 PM
Surely, Beryl… in a naturist retreat, the sun shines everywhere… I promise not to look…… your honour ;-)
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:47 AM
That’s very noble of you Terry, thank you… Beryl
Ashley Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 5:23 PM
Dear Beryl, when wearing nothing else at least wear sunscreen lol. I adore the cheeky humor of your limerick. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Edmonds  Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 5:32 PM
Thank you dear Susan. I will take your advice as burnt sensitive parts are not nice… Beryl
Flood Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 5:09 PM
There are places really one doesn’t want sun burn, Beryl ;-) enjoyed, good luck in contest
Edmonds  Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 5:12 PM
You’re right Terry, sun burns in sensitive places. Thanks for reading and the good luck wish… Beryl
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