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Where the River Bends

Mist rises high above the waterfalls splashes As the sun shines through the mist, Rainbow sunrays cover the mossy mountain slope Emerald and jade stones sparkle on the landscape From the pool a small shallow stream winds a path A lone white egret stands watching on the island

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/12/2023 2:52:00 AM

"A lone white egret stands watching on the island" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

John Watt

Date: 7/8/2023 11:39:00 PM

Beautiful writing from "the outdoorsman poet". The images bring back such delightful memories of hiking through the woods - the discovery of a waterfall, the sounds of streams rolling over the loose stones, the mists that fill the morning valleys, the birds and wildlife that go about their lives. Pure loveliness. Hope all is well with you ~ John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2023 9:16:00 PM

Wutcha tryin' to do here, CM? Become a romantic poet or something?!... brw: I enjoyed this write as least as much as all of Wm. Wordworth's nature poems put together. Bravo, poet! ~ gw

Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2023 2:48:00 PM

Lovely scene and beautiful imagery, Charles. I enjoyed the beauty of it. Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2023 1:56:00 PM

I enjoyed your creative write. Have a great weekend...............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/8/2023 8:44:00 AM

Great imagery. I can imagine all the details of your poem. Exhilarating.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/8/2023 5:04:00 AM

Such paradise as you've created Charlie, surely must be amazing to see! I feel I almost can reading your image filled lines! I love the last line especially! Happy Saturday!!