where the reindeer lay

sparkling from the moon 
icicles on evergreens
'neath the starry skies
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Kendrick Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 11:44 AM
So pretty. Congrats, Charles
Callus Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 2:18 PM
A descriptive 3-liner, Charlie; just like a photo. ~ Regards & happy Christmas // paul
Kitchin Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Charlie, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku write again. Merry Christmas...........
Silence Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:21 PM
In just a few words you have stirred this soul of mine with the beauty and divinity of your brilliant piece, amazing poet!
Baker Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Sounds much better than a barn to me, Charlie. Nice Haiku, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
M  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Awww Charlie…..sounds so lovely l want to lay there with reindeers!! Ha….Debx
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Sounds nice...me too! (lol) Thank you, Deb. Charliex
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Ooh something quite lovely here!
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Love the image Charlie, I can feel the chill. Tom
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Tom. Chill is in the air! Charlie
One Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Lovely imagery Charlie..
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, SO.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 6:28 AM
A lovely Haiku  write. Have a great day writing away.............
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Paula. Have a nice evening!
Baker Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Excellent Haiku, Charles, I've seen the scene you've painted with your poetic words, in real life. a beautiful scene. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift with us, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Bill. I've seen it myself :) Have a nice week, my friend. Charlie
Sharma  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Oh my, this is such a magical haiku poem, dear Charles! I'm loving your artistic imageries here that flow so beautifully anf evocatively here "sparkling from the moon" Such a gorgeous opening! "icicles on evergreens" Wow, so creative.. "neath the starry skies" Absolutely profound.. Truly enjoyed reading this micro tale..amazingly crafted! :)
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Such a lovely comment, Hiya. Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a wonderful evening...hugs :)
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