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Where the Pomegranates Grow

Outside the city where lush
Lovely pomegranates grow
The spring has sprung and flowers show
Birds rear their young in tones hushed

The lady weeps in a silent
Strain, love has left a broken heart
In pain, where the pomegranates start
To bloom once again, so vibrant

Hush my love your chance to shine bright
Slipped in on a cloud silver lined
A knight so good and deeply kind
Caught your tears throughout the long night  

He sprinkles them upon the air
Pomegranate bushes sprang up
Their juice forever fill your cup
Arise love, his maiden fair

Receive his love, freed from despair
Outside the city, in rural
Terrain. a perfect scene ~mural
Where pomegranates grow with flair

Inspired by Julia Ward contest A First Line Prompt
Written: May 01, 2016

First stanza of 

"I Wandered Lonely As A Cloud"

Written by: William Wordsworth
Which is called Lyric Poetry 

"I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils; 
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:27 AM
Awesome win, Sara....love skat
De Burca Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Lovely poem, Sara. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Sara, beautifully penned, you have a true gift lady...congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-Luloo
Anish Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 9:38 PM
The name of the film is The Pomegranate of Remembrance
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Thanks for letting me know..Sara
Anish Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 6:48 PM
I like your pomegranate poem. My late father loved Wordsworth - he also set Tennyson - and yes some of my poems to music. There is a short Israeli poetry movie you might want to check out - it is by an Israeli poetess - she made a short film which you can see on the internet - you would probably like it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Thanks for the information but you did not give me a name of the movie or the Poetess so I can not go any further..I appreciate the kind review of my work..Thanks for dropping by and taking time to read and comment..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:31 AM
Excellent. Lovely imagery poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 4:06 PM
truly a lyrical piece so fluently crafted, sara.. again, nature blesses you... huggs
La France Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Sara, this is beautiful, excellent write and I have always loved that Wordsworth poem, 7 ~
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thanks for dropping by and taking time to leave a comment..Seems we have something in common that we both enjoy Wordsworth's poems..Sara
Ball Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Beautiful Longfellow is also one of my fave poets. Very well done and a fine place to look for inspiration.
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Yes, I have reads some of Longfellow's work but a very long time ago..I need to look him up again and reread some that I liked..Thanks for stopping by and for the kind review..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 8:42 PM
wow, I love how you got so inspired with this one and also from the wonderful Wordsworth poem. I have always loved that one so much myself. good luck in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thanks for being wowed..I appreciate the kind review..Sara
Williams Gault Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Such serene scenes you have painted, and what lovely romantic imagery. Enjoyed the read.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 8:32 AM
- A beautiful painting where spring has sprung, dear Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :) # 7 :)
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