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Where The Light Dances

In a garden, where light dances ‘pon the trees 

Privet hedge’s blossoms perfume the cool damp air 

A secret room inside holds lovers’ decree 

Whispers of promises, love beyond compare 

Emerald leaves kissed by the sun’s gold strikes me 

Revealing lovers embraced without a care 

In this hidden haven, a new tale unfolds 

Hearts entwined, bound by God’s love and grace that holds

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Howard Kerr

September 27, 2026 at 12:08 AM

Sara, you have written a poem of enduring beauty. Words that gleam and glow about romance. The very essence of true happiness.🔥✨⭐🌸🌙 Howard

Paula Goldsmith

April 29, 2024 at 1:51 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. A Beautiful Picture. Wish I was on your bench reading a book.... Enjoy your day writing away......................

Sara Kendrick

April 29, 2024 at 3:15 PM

I hope you find time to be on the bench and read that book, Paula. Thanks for the visit. No writing today. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

April 29, 2024 at 2:49 AM

Where can I find that lovely garden you posted? I wish I had a garden, but my small corridor can have only green plants with no flowers.

Sara Kendrick

April 29, 2024 at 5:24 AM

So sorry, Victor, that you can not have some flowers. What about inside your home? Is that restricted as well? Well, actually that is an internet picture. My garden/flowers have met with a terrible fate, a gardener too old to care for them. My husband used weed killer and has just about killed out all of what I had planted. I am not able to get out there anymore and care for them. Life is not easy sometimes. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Regina Elliott

April 28, 2024 at 5:07 PM

A quite artistic and romantic Rispetto poem, Sara. A resounding Sunday evening FAV. Musical in its delivery. God's loving blessings to you and your's. xox

Sara Kendrick

April 29, 2024 at 5:21 AM

Thank you, Regina. I need all God's loving blessings I can get. Without His love and grace I could not make it. Sara K

Yann Rolland

April 28, 2024 at 9:43 AM

wonderful and gracious poem, to immerge his soul, so much delicacy, thanks poet

Sara Kendrick

April 28, 2024 at 2:21 PM

Yann, your most gracious comment has an authentic feel and is just what I needed to read ..Thank you. Sara K

Arthur Vaso

April 27, 2024 at 10:59 PM

Wonderful romantic poetry!

Sara Kendrick

April 28, 2024 at 4:18 AM

Why, thank you, Arthur. I appreciate the compliment. Sara K

Ravindra K Kapoor

April 27, 2024 at 7:42 AM

The beauty of your words flows like a song in the air revealing the hidden beauty of the dance of light. Which always enchant the passer by. Great poem backed by an eye catching scene / painting. This goes as my favourite poem.... Love and best wishes always...df Sara....Ravindra

Sara Kendrick

April 27, 2024 at 3:31 PM

I am honored that you would fave this one. Your visit is uplifting. Thank you for the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Sara K