Where The Light Dances

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In a garden, where light dances ‘pon the trees Privet hedge’s blossoms perfume the cool damp air A secret room inside holds lovers’ decree Whispers of promises, love beyond compare Emerald leaves kissed by the sun’s gold strikes me Revealing lovers embraced without a care In this hidden haven, a new tale unfolds Hearts entwined, bound by God’s love and grace that holds

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2024 1:51:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. A Beautiful Picture. Wish I was on your bench reading a book.... Enjoy your day writing away......................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/29/2024 3:15:00 PM

I hope you find time to be on the bench and read that book, Paula. Thanks for the visit. No writing today. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/29/2024 2:49:00 AM

Where can I find that lovely garden you posted? I wish I had a garden, but my small corridor can have only green plants with no flowers.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/29/2024 5:24:00 AM

So sorry, Victor, that you can not have some flowers. What about inside your home? Is that restricted as well? Well, actually that is an internet picture. My garden/flowers have met with a terrible fate, a gardener too old to care for them. My husband used weed killer and has just about killed out all of what I had planted. I am not able to get out there anymore and care for them. Life is not easy sometimes. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Regina Elliott

Date: 4/28/2024 5:07:00 PM

A quite artistic and romantic Rispetto poem, Sara. A resounding Sunday evening FAV. Musical in its delivery. God's loving blessings to you and your's. xox

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/29/2024 5:21:00 AM

Thank you, Regina. I need all God's loving blessings I can get. Without His love and grace I could not make it. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/28/2024 9:43:00 AM

wonderful and gracious poem, to immerge his soul, so much delicacy, thanks poet

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/28/2024 2:21:00 PM

Yann, your most gracious comment has an authentic feel and is just what I needed to read ..Thank you. Sara K

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/27/2024 10:59:00 PM

Wonderful romantic poetry!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/28/2024 4:18:00 AM

Why, thank you, Arthur. I appreciate the compliment. Sara K

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/27/2024 7:42:00 AM

The beauty of your words flows like a song in the air revealing the hidden beauty of the dance of light. Which always enchant the passer by. Great poem backed by an eye catching scene / painting. This goes as my favourite poem.... Love and best wishes always...df Sara....Ravindra

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2024 3:31:00 PM

I am honored that you would fave this one. Your visit is uplifting. Thank you for the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Sara K