Carrie Richards Poet Free verse

Where Somewhere Is Tomorrow

Let me run again,
through the tall, amber grass,
where sunbeams slope like stairways,
and where tomorrow waits,
at the top of the stairs.



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1/8/15  For the contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud "Somewhere"
By Carrie Richards  (30 syllables)

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 15, 2015 at 1:43 AM And back again wid big congrats on this awesome win Carrie!

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2015 at 12:41 AM very nice, as always, Carrie. BIG congrats.

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2015 at 9:28 PM Love this Carrie, somewhere out there.... Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Archana Garg January 14, 2015 at 10:18 AM Lovely thought and beautifully expressed ( A very rare combination), Congrats my dear........

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 14, 2015 at 9:34 AM Congrats!!-]RAJAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2015 at 2:53 AM kudos Carrie.. :)!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 13, 2015 at 11:10 PM Still a first place for me, Carrie...congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Dr.Ram Mehta January 13, 2015 at 9:33 PM Congrats on a fine win, Carrie. very creative visual

David Mohn January 13, 2015 at 7:03 PM Love the visual you create here...congrats Carrie

Casarah Nance January 13, 2015 at 5:34 PM -where tomorrow waits at the top of the stairs-love that line! great win! u rock

Jan Allison January 13, 2015 at 2:38 PM Beautifully penned Carrie Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x

Sandra Haight January 13, 2015 at 2:01 PM Hi Carrie, stopping back to say congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr January 13, 2015 at 12:58 PM congratulations Carrie on this fine write and win

Sandra Haight January 12, 2015 at 1:26 PM Beautiful vision in your words, Carrie. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 12, 2015 at 12:00 PM Beautiful, Carrie! The imagery and metaphors are beyond incredible. A fav for me and I predict first place...hugs, Rhonda

Verlena S. Walker January 10, 2015 at 6:10 PM Beautiful verse Carrie. GL in the contest... Verlena

Bill Yates January 10, 2015 at 9:23 AM Lots said in one sentence.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 8, 2015 at 9:25 PM Yes future waiting at the top of stairs,, very positive thought Carrie! gl in contest!

Frederic Parker January 8, 2015 at 8:50 PM where tomorrow waits at the top of the stairs...that's a very nice line..good poem ..good luck in nette's contest

David Meade January 8, 2015 at 8:23 PM I like this -- delightful! 7