Where Skies Aren'T Gray

The moment my life is over,
Is the moment I rest in peace.
I yearn my final freeing,
For my unhappiness to cease.

All that had been taken,
Shall be made good.
And all that puzzled me, 
Shall be understood.

And the warm precious hand,
I lost on that tragic day.
Shall extend for mine,
Leading me where skies aren't gray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Neal Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 1:54 PM
nice touching poem do you write a lot of sad poems
Moin Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 8:13 AM
A great write, Raul. An enchanting Inspirational poem. It expresses true sentiments. Thanks for your beautiful comments on my poem Love -very encouraging. -Fareeda
Steenkamp Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 7:22 AM
Very good poem.... we should focus more on that than the little things that tear us down....
Torres Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 4:51 PM
Very touching Raul. Michael Torres
Loving Iii Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 4:36 PM
good piece and so truthfull for some of us we wait for the day. thanks for reminding us. jhl
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