Where Self Love Is Born

a fantasy land dreamt up by sleeping child a peaceful magical place where self-love is born imperative to her soul

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/1/2021 7:45:00 PM

Caren, Such a nice quiet space where dreams are carried on child's sleeping wings. -Richard

Quoth Theraven
Date: 5/18/2021 7:13:00 AM

There is 'old stuff' and there is 'a timeless gem'.. 'imperative to her soul' Love that line, 'cause you gave it life.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2021 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I like it that you cough up my old stuff I have forgotten I ever wrote.

Pratap Roy

Date: 12/13/2019 1:28:00 AM

So nicely written. God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2019 6:46:00 AM

Thank you Pratap. I enjoyed writing this one.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/11/2018 2:12:00 PM

This says so much, with so much insight and meaning, Caren. Your last line, "imperative to her soul" the word imperative is a perfect choice. So strong, wouldn't have considered it, so glad that you did!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/11/2018 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your appreciation,my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/13/2018 11:13:00 AM

Beautifully done, another "fav" I like the magical fantasy idea.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/14/2018 1:16:00 AM

I cannot help but love the magical fantasy stuff, living in my dream-world.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/13/2018 6:38:00 AM

Lovely, Caren. A FAVE for me.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/13/2018 7:03:00 AM

Thank you Line. I truly loved doing this one. I am running back to read TYPES again, inspired by my friend M.L. Kiser who is posting a variety of types.