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Where Roses Never Die

I remember the first roses I received. I was going on my first official date, and my beau brought me a beautiful bouquet of red roses. At the time I was so embarrassed when I had to bring them into the house and put them in a vase with all my siblings grinning at me. Our relationship lasted a little longer then the roses, but eventually they both died. I remember the roses I picked out for my wedding day. I insisted they be yellow because that happened to be my favourite colour of roses at the time. After the wedding I put them in the freezer where they lived in a frozen state for many years among the steaks and rouladen. Although I treasured them dearly I eventually had to throw them out and they died. I remember the single red rose my seven month old son, with the help of his father brought me on my very first Mothers Day. It was one of the proudest days of my life actually holding the title of all titles, Mother. I had held that dream in my heart since I was a young girl. Time past before my son said the word Mother, And long before he did, that rose had also died. In the years to come I received many roses. Red roses, yellow ones, white roses, blue, orange roses, pink roses, rainbow roses too. For Mothers day, wedding day, birthdays, holidays, date days, Sundays and just for fun days. Roses were always there from the day of marriage until they filled my husbands grave. Now all those roses, every single one, all gifts of love, have died. Every last one. The most amazing thing occurred over all those years, although the roses died memories of each and every one of them live on till this day. I still see them in their original beauty, smell their sweet scents. If it wasn’t for those roses, would I still remember those special days? My eyes have taken the pictures of each rose and filed them in my heart, where roses never die. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 12.17.2014 Contest: Roses, Roses, Roses 2nd

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Date: 12/26/2014 10:31:00 PM
BRENDA, CONGRATS ON THE AWESOME TOP WIN... LINDA
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Date: 12/23/2014 7:39:00 AM
I thought I would come and smell the roses again. Merry Christmas Brenda.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/23/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Richard. I hope their scent hasn't diminished.
Date: 12/20/2014 4:55:00 AM
Brilliant suggestive title, congratulation on the win, Brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 5:58:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta
Date: 12/20/2014 2:12:00 AM
As usual,this is wonderful; congrats Brenda...huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Kayod5
Date: 12/19/2014 4:57:00 PM
Well done Brenda! Such a lovely poem...memories, love and affection transmitted through these lovely flowers. You deserved to win and place so high...congratulations. // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 5:57:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words Paul.
Date: 12/19/2014 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Brenda, this poem is a keeper it is so meaningful. Blessings and Merry Christmas to you and yours
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I hope I can keep them.
Date: 12/19/2014 2:05:00 PM
many many congrats my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Jan. XOXO
Date: 12/19/2014 1:35:00 PM
Brenda, your poem is breathtaking...I missed it before today seeing it on the winner's list. It really touched my heart, and the emotions you shared are powerful. A big congratulations on yor well-deserved win. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for your support Sandra.
Date: 12/19/2014 9:37:00 AM
I am enthralled by the sweet, yet sad feeling of this poem. Sometimes I read a poem and forget it, but this is the kind that stay with me for a long time.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/19/2014 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Isaiah. I'm happy you enjoyed reading this.
Date: 12/18/2014 7:29:00 PM
This is a wonderful expression of your affection for the one's you love. I am touched by the pictures you have painted and now your roses have lived on in my mind as well.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:33:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Richard. I'm glad you like it.
Date: 12/18/2014 3:38:00 PM
Oh I do love roses...Thanks for a great poem.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:28:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 12/18/2014 11:32:00 AM
Enjoyed learning a little about you and your life from your contest entry..Roses are a beauty all in their own right..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 12/18/2014 2:18:00 AM
roses so magical a flower with enormous medical properties so delghtful as is your whimsical write Brenda gl in contest hugs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Dave.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Shadow.
Date: 12/17/2014 6:21:00 PM
Excellent work on the subject of roses my dear, loved every verse, totally awesome imagery I feel as though I could reach out and touch these lovely blossoms, love the pic choose also it was excuse the expression picture perfect, lol hope that didn't sound corny lol great job lady poet, cheri
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/19/2014 11:36:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl.
Date: 12/17/2014 5:20:00 PM
So beautiful Brenda...It is a fact that scent does induce memories...I'm sure the smell of roses brings back a lot of memories for you....hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:32:00 PM
Very much so Tim. Some good some no so..
Date: 12/17/2014 4:21:00 PM
my eyes misted over reading this write Brenda - such an emotional write my friend - my hubby has NEVER borught me roses - guess after 25 yrs together I would worry if he did now LOL - good luck I am sure Vienna will love this:-) Hugs Jan (7)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/18/2014 7:27:00 PM
Ah, Jan. I give you this bouquet above my poem. XOXO

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