Where On Earth Can I Be

Startled at waking beneath a gold gilded tree.
Thoughts quickly ventured through my mind, magic?
As wonderment asked, “Where on earth could I be?”
Intelligence knew a gold tree held no logic.
Rainbows and leprechauns pass through children's dreams. 
Was I awake? Where was my reality? 
Altogether lost in fantasy far away?
Yes, that must be it, a nervous breakdown.
 
Totally prepared to call my shrink, I shrieked!
Over the rise, I saw figures dressed in white…redeemed!

They came gliding through the clouds, oh, mental help!
Heaven had descended or so it to me seemed.
Exceptionally weird was their sight amid stars.
 
Spacemen dressed in white smiled and cheered.
Tomorrow we shall relate your eternal fate.
And you shall know all about the gold gilded tree.
Remember all those stories about evolution.
Surprise!  The stairway to the stars goes through Mars.


© February 21, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: STAIRWAY TO THE STARS
Sponsor: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/28/2012 4:53:00 PM
Enjoyed the read here Dane-Anne,, and congratulations..!
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Dane Ann. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:18:00 AM
Dane,congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann enjoyed this well done xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:07:00 PM
congrats Dane Ann on sweet success in my contest and thankxx for supporting always..luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:31:00 AM
Surprise! :) I enjoyed reading your poem. Ya made me giggle. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:34:00 AM
...ooops! I didn't mean as it sounds on re-reading my comment, that it's a surprise in my enjoyement of the poem....
Date: 2/21/2012 9:31:00 AM
Smile ˜ You know I have noticed throughout the years here at Poesoup that many of you like to write about animals much more than Humanity - Smile - Love, John!:) *
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