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Where No Other Has Ventured... Hell

We walked into the depths of Hell We walked where no other had ventured Where fire burns forevermore Destroying everything, but The living, who are there To be tormented forever By the flames of sins they have committed Reminding them every waking hour Of the choices they made The gates, dark and black Wrought iron, reflecting the glow Smoke filling the air Filling your lungs making Breathing impossible Little orange creatures With 280 black ragged teeth And pointy tails Rough rigid scales And eyes resembling That of their master, Satan Dirty yellow, and burning with anger The floors coal Hotter than the sun But walked on by all The sky high above Smoke filled, and blood red We walked where no other had ventured In the depths of Hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/22/2009 8:50:00 PM
A very scary description of Hell. Good imagery and a good write Jen.
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