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Where No Other Has Ventured... Heaven

We walked where no other had ventured We walked into the corners Heaven Where clouds fill your view Healing everything, on The golden path Leading to the golden gates Glowing, shouting Hallelujah Tall and grand Joy filling the air Filling your lungs with sweetness Breathing deep satisfying breaths Angels floating above Your heads with halo's And wings of silk, soft, and gentle The sun, glorious is in view As you float along, wearing, Gentle gowns, of warm cotton Everything resembling Our loving Father Peaceful and loving Everything in Harmony Music is playing softly Filling your ears As you and all the others Watch the world below, thoughtfully We walked where no other had ventured In the corners of Heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/22/2009 8:52:00 PM
I think I'd rather be here. Love the description of your heaven. Another good write Jen. I like the two conflicting writes too.
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