Where Music Takes Us

it is the direct opposition
to the string
that makes the violin sing

it is the reverberation of the lips
that makes jazz trumpets strip
down to the core of soul
as the music swallows us whole

in the thump of the drum
i am left stalled and numb
as the music overwhelms me
my body dies
my spirit free
as I rise an octave or two
- emotions
smoky and blue

I am taken from here
to there
to nowhere
nowhere – as it does not exist
here, tangible
it cannot be found or bent
indestructible
this place of being
- eye unseen
yet heart explores it
freely
- so free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 17, 2014 at 10:55 PM
EXCELLENT!! I can't compliment this poem enough, so lets just say : Amazingly put, and such fluid "readablilty" it sucks you in to the end, were you wish it wasn't over yet!! I rate a 7 plus fav+.. Another poet once payed me a compliment that I took in esteem and steal in this situation. I think it is first rate, and I wish I had wrote it.
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