CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

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WHERE LOVE FEELS NO GOODBYE

For Steve ... I'll see you when I leave. Little Darling

your feel
still comes
to me
when I 
recall
our love
filled years

our shared
passion
goes on
inside
my heart
though gone
are tears

decades
went by
while I
cried ‘why
did you
so choose
to die’

I know
in time
we will
unite
where love
feels no
good-bye

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David Crandall September 14, 2025 at 5:47 PM a touching poem!

Terry Miller September 14, 2025 at 4:20 PM Oh, you managed such passion in such a rigid structure, I am in awe, congratulations

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2025 at 2:36 PM I should have gone with emotion like you did. Mist of the topped placed are either emotive or very clever. Congratulations

Charles Messina September 13, 2025 at 11:33 AM CayCay, this sad yet beautiful poem touched me. One day you will meet again "where love feels no good-bye" Congratulations on your top win! Hugs Charlie CayCay Godwin September 13, 2025 at 12:31 PM Thank you, Charlie, for sponsoring. Your contest are always interesting challenges to pen and I appreciate the time you put into them for us. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf August 31, 2025 at 7:55 PM Love how that last stanza converts potential maudlin melancholy into hope and strength. Kudos, Gershon

Paige Hind August 30, 2025 at 7:31 PM A beautiful poem - so sweetly sad

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2025 at 7:46 PM Wow, an amazing job with this one. It's kind of a cool form. Limiting and yet pretty interesting to write with. You came up with a nice emotional theme

Mystic Rose Rose August 28, 2025 at 6:46 PM One day you will be united again, and it will be pure bliss by then :)

I Am Anaya August 28, 2025 at 2:31 PM I can't imagine losing my best freind, God forbid as they say. Then I reread and see a story of no goodbyes and only that of eternal love. Great job 2,7,4 looks difficult, you made it look easy, CC. GL with this already winner! xhugs

Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2025 at 7:41 AM - Love the last verse here, CayCay :) - Lots of emotion - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar August 28, 2025 at 2:08 AM CayCay, you're a marvel. Not an easy contest. I wouldn't dare try it. Best for a win. CayCay Godwin August 28, 2025 at 5:48 AM You called me a marvel - I don't think anyone has ever called me that before. Thank you, thank you very much, so sweet. Always good to see you, Victor. Have the best possible day. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

sara Etgen-Baker August 27, 2025 at 6:04 PM an engaging write, CayCay. I found your words filled with a level of hope, even though love lingers long past death and grief. Beautiful...faving, CayCay Godwin August 28, 2025 at 5:47 AM It means a great deal to me that you faved this. Thank you, Sara. I wrote it thinking of my 1st husband whom I lost so it has matter and meaning to me, as well. I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay