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Where Love Couldn'T Live

Emotions vibrate through the heavens Crying out desirous of a love Beseeching its warm embrace Yet it goes unfelt, unheard, unanswered Hopes for a pragmatic love just a dream Expectations being preconceived For the universe could not grasp the greatness of her yearning, this she had come to grips with because surely none could provide fulfillment Melancholy settles over her as she carefully wraps her love back up in ribbons of longing, placing it back into a box of disappointment Sitting upon her empty bed of sorrow absent of emotion For tears dried up years ago and only out of habit did she release its vibration out into the heavens knowing she would remain a castaway on this island where love seemed could not live.........

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Date: 9/27/2019 7:19:00 AM
"Melancholy settles over her as she carefully wraps her love back up in ribbons of longing, placing it back into a box of disappointment" - so many go back in time and remember. I try to throw my memories down the river and move on daily. But you have captured so many here.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/27/2019 9:16:00 AM
Caren thank you so much my friend!;)
Date: 9/23/2019 8:13:00 AM
Wow, this was a sad and longing and deeply lonely feeling poem that you so wonderfully delivered in your amazing style. Really nicely done Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/23/2019 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Chris!;)
Date: 9/22/2019 3:15:00 PM
such a sad lonely feel to this one....beautifully penned but poignant poem my friend :) hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/22/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandy! I do appreciate your comment and read!;)

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