Where Lilacs Bloomed

Where lilacs bloomed, I spied a brown-haired child. She, riveted by what was in her book, did not see me! She wore a wistful look. I guessed her to be somewhat shy and mild. The girl at last looked up and showed surprise to see me standing there to study her. What happened after that is now a blur, but I recall she had my same light eyes. Where lilacs bloomed, I’d sat against that tree while reading. Was I then inside a dream? A woman startled me. Why does it seem the woman who appeared that day was me? Sept. 15, 2018 for Dear Heart's Enclosed Rhyme - September, 2018 Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/18/2018 5:16:00 PM
Andrea, Very well done.:) It seems you still have a kid's license!
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Date: 11/14/2018 1:00:00 PM
This is one of your best. 4realz.
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:26:00 PM
shades of Edgar Poe
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Date: 10/11/2018 6:09:00 AM
Nicely imaged , i luvd it :;)
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Date: 10/6/2018 12:31:00 AM
I like this poem a lot, message and delivery. Thank you for writing and sharing.
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:42:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem. Congrats Andrea.
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Date: 10/2/2018 3:07:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~
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Date: 10/1/2018 6:29:00 PM
Dreamy, intriguing, and very well-written, Andrea. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:00:00 PM
Andrea, back to say congrats on your win. John
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Date: 9/30/2018 5:30:00 AM
Love the mystery in your poem, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/30/2018 5:02:00 AM
Your poem tackles the mysterious way that our mind can sometimes work...intermingling the past and present. Congratulations on yet another podium finish! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/29/2018 9:15:00 PM
I knew she would like your lovely entry Andrea. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
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Date: 9/29/2018 8:05:00 PM
Your dreamy poem is intriguing and beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:40:00 PM
Finding yourself within a book within a dream..Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 9/29/2018 6:57:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 9/18/2018 10:40:00 PM
Seems what should what is wats to be, staring in, back...a goose pimple thing...wow nice.
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Date: 9/19/2018 5:46:00 PM
I'm so glad you got that effect. That was what I was going for.
Date: 9/18/2018 9:08:00 AM
Andrea in wonderland;)
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Date: 9/17/2018 9:11:00 AM
A wonderful surreal story, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 9/16/2018 10:56:00 AM
This work has a nice dream - like feel to it - it is almost surrealist. I prayed the other day in synagogue - I hope it does some good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/16/2018 10:31:00 AM
introspection is the most intimate of all of our thoughts...good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/16/2018 6:58:00 AM
You always surpass the challenge Andrea. Sweetly done.
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Date: 9/15/2018 6:17:00 PM
Lovely on so many levels, Andrea. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 9/15/2018 5:24:00 PM
You tell a great story Andrea! I think this enclossed rhyme contest is going to be a real challenge. I wrote one that is going in the bin. I am sure she will love yours! : )
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