Where Lilacs Bloomed

Where lilacs bloomed, I spied a brown-haired child. She, riveted by what was in her book, did not see me! She wore a wistful look. I guessed her to be somewhat shy and mild. The girl at last looked up and showed surprise to see me standing there to study her. What happened after that is now a blur, but I recall she had my same light eyes. Where lilacs bloomed, I’d sat against that tree while reading. Was I then inside a dream? A woman startled me. Why does it seem the woman who appeared that day was me? Sept. 15, 2018 for Dear Heart's Enclosed Rhyme - September, 2018 Poetry Contest
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Drowley Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Andrea, Very well done.:) It seems you still have a kid's license!
Garcia Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 1:00 PM
This is one of your best. 4realz.
Warlov Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 2:26 PM
shades of Edgar Poe
Kalishian Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Nicely imaged , i luvd it :;)
Musser Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 12:31 AM
I like this poem a lot, message and delivery. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Fisher Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 5:42 PM
This is a beautiful poem. Congrats Andrea.
La France Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Dreamy, intriguing, and very well-written, Andrea. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Andrea, back to say congrats on your win. John
Kitchin Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Love the mystery in your poem, congratulations on your win!
Callus Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Your poem tackles the mysterious way that our mind can sometimes work...intermingling the past and present. Congratulations on yet another podium finish! Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:15 PM
I knew she would like your lovely entry Andrea. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
Ashley Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Your dreamy poem is intriguing and beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
May Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Finding yourself within a book within a dream..Congrats on your win Andrea..
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
Gregory Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Seems what should what is wats to be, staring in, back...a goose pimple thing...wow nice.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 5:46 PM
I'm so glad you got that effect. That was what I was going for.
Daniel Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Andrea in wonderland;)
Gondolf Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:11 AM
A wonderful surreal story, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. John
Anish Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 10:56 AM
This work has a nice dream - like feel to it - it is almost surrealist. I prayed the other day in synagogue - I hope it does some good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Parker Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 10:31 AM
introspection is the most intimate of all of our thoughts...good luck in the contest
Krutsinger Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 6:58 AM
You always surpass the challenge Andrea. Sweetly done.
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Lovely on so many levels, Andrea. A FAVE for me.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:24 PM
You tell a great story Andrea! I think this enclossed rhyme contest is going to be a real challenge. I wrote one that is going in the bin. I am sure she will love yours! : )
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