Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Where Is the Blame

Where is the blame...
                                        When teardops fell just the same...

                                           Pointing fingers in the darkness...
                                          Only spreads a sheet of sadness...

                                    I never left, only walked backwards away...
                                Then you were small like a flower of yesterday...

                                  We faded like to two sunsets across one sky...
                          We both pushed tomorrow away as hard as we can try...
                                   
                           The tide of pain washed in and pulled us far out to sea...
                   Where we tumbled and drowned in a love that wasn't meant to be...

                               I could stand now and say I'm sorry till the end of time...
                         But you deserved more then a partime lover who only rhymes...

                                                      Where is the blame...
                                                        We both can see...
                                       Yesterday and today it's always on me...

                                                 ~dedicated to an old friend~

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Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2013 at 3:20 PM Michael; This is beautiful and I had already commented on it. Is this something that happened in your life? Mine was inspired by true facts. I have 3 poems here From part I - to part III. If you ever have time and nothing to do. Maybe you wanr to look them over. ( A Man Stood ) Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem..... Lucilla

Poet Destroyer A December 8, 2012 at 8:05 PM soup mail

Heather Ober December 7, 2012 at 1:07 PM "We faded like two sunsets across one sky" - Brilliant line!

Carol Eastman October 16, 2012 at 2:17 PM You always hold our minds to your words... Such a gift. My poems are just flufy HaHA... your's are way deeper.

Jay Loveless October 5, 2012 at 4:50 PM Very Beautiful and touching.

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2012 at 1:05 PM oh, this must be one i saw at a blog of yours. It seems familiar but I have no comment below here. this one makes me really want to know the story behind it. So sad when friendships fade. I think this must have been a girlfriend and an important one!

Lucilla Carrillo September 22, 2012 at 1:56 PM This is good, but sad. What is gone - it's gone and it won't be back and it does - it won't be the same. If it's for the contest- it's a good one. Lucilla

Black Eyed Susan September 20, 2012 at 7:14 AM good ending :) soupmail

Daniela Angeja September 18, 2012 at 10:42 AM Always very good!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2012 at 10:10 AM oh forgot ..xoxo .. my bad .. Ron is doing all my typing once again luv ..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2012 at 10:08 AM a poignant expression of lost love and longing of yesterday's dream Michael luv .. nicely rhymed to enhance the depth of the message so intense .. guess u have been busy luv .. am seeing hand specialist 9/19 to decide how to kick this constant pain .. JG in happy mode cause Giants won ..

Cynthia Alvez September 16, 2012 at 9:37 AM A heart speaks.... Love this passionate verse Michael. Cynthia

Wilma Neels September 16, 2012 at 7:31 AM A beautiful dedication, MJF in reflective mode.. Treasure the beautiful memories and feel happy that it happened.. Don't ponder on the heartache and regrets my friend.. Hope your weekend's been a good one ;) love Wilma

Russell Sivey September 15, 2012 at 6:36 PM What a fabulous, delightful and amazingly expressed write here my friend! I truly love each and every heartbeat of this loving poem...knowing where the blame goes is half the battle, next is knowing what to do with it! I really enjoyed this write that I have read this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Kash Poet September 15, 2012 at 11:16 AM A beautiful poem here Michael.A great dedication to your friend.