Bruce Adams Poet Sonnet

Where Is My Mind

A victim of society's profanity
     Trying to fit in with urbanity
     Bigger, fancier, who thought of this insanity
     Commercials full of inanity

     Working night and day fatality
     Need more money false reality
     Corporations destroy vitality
     Hate my job brutality

     Be honest with myself morality
     Get away from deadly formality
     No more a puppet of other's mentality
     Who want my soul full of mundanity

     My spirit rise high in volcanity
     Do only what brings passion humanity

     1/24/2017  Word Challenge Contest, sponsored by Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2017 at 8:04 PM you did a great job with this challenge. I just could not imagine writing a poem with so many ality words in it, but I think yours is one of the better ones I have seen. Good luck, my friend.

John Herlihy January 24, 2017 at 11:43 PM An interesting monorhyme poem with some insightful thoughts. JH