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Where I Wonder

This December day that feels like March or April Beckons me down to my old thoughtful spot To the bench on the hill above the lake Where I have discovered poems waiting for me Behind me, the oaks are alive With a red-winged blackbird raucous Below me, a solitary doe grazes the tender Emerald green left where the waters receded "Hello, deer!" I call out to her, waving She looks up, dewdrop eyes and ears Like petals turned toward me curiously A mariposa lily blooming toward my light I feel the woodpecker’s fervent knock inside my ribcage And the everywhere croak of a single unseen frog Is the creak of a door I never meant to close Slowly opening again, letting it all back in The moss on my heart is cool in the winter sun The lace lichen holds my dreams among the trees And there is a brand new poem waiting for me "Hello, dear," I say again, and this time I am sincere.

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Date: 2/11/2024 12:43:00 PM
Dear Ina, your poem is a nature haiku spun into a mesmerizing poem! Each line creates the perfect scene, from the displaced December to the dewdrop-eyed deer. I love the subtle metaphors - the woodpecker's knock mirroring creative urges, the creaking door symbolizing reawakening. The thawing in the winter sun hints at emotional vulnerability. Your poem ends with a sincere "hello" to both the poem and nature, a beautiful acknowledgement of interconnectedness. Blessings, Daniel
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Ina Goodling
Date: 2/11/2024 12:48:00 PM
That is one of the most beautifully detailed comments I have ever received. Truly a poem in its own right. Thank you so much for making my day with your kind words!

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