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Where I Want To Go

Where a moon will sit at my blue window For I find my moon very often dead And offers to lend me some of its snow As easily as life provides me bread Where rustles of whisper you lay in wind With which I can make my daily poems For you at the time’s edge as night declines And dreams recede in the glow-worms like gems Where the life perches on a little peace Struggle for life ends in your loving gaze In the pool your letters swim like the geese Orange slice you gave me floats in sunrays There I would like to be one day alone Look there how in the wind the leaf is blown ______________________________________________ 27/02/2017 /Where I Want To Go /Sponsor: Nicola Byrne

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Date: 3/29/2017 12:47:00 AM
Another beautifully penned sonnet.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/29/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/20/2017 10:45:00 PM
Wonderful work Probir congratulations...
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Charlie ... I dont know why I didnt come across your poem for quite some time while browsing, reading and commenting here ... I hope to ...
Date: 3/6/2017 10:47:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/6/2017 10:41:00 PM
Oh, a long time after we are crossing path ... I do remember you helped me to develop as a poet in this unique community ... you had considered a sonnet of mine for a very good placement in your contest in my almost fledgling phase ... Thank you Funom ...
Date: 2/28/2017 12:22:00 PM
That is a fantastic place to go my friend, Probir, myself will be content your poetry of that place to read! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/6/2017 10:47:00 PM
I cannot understand how your lovely comment remains unreplied ... my inadvertence ... Sorry ... and Thank You ...

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