Augustus Black Poet Free verse

Where I Live

I live where reaching home safely for girls is a great success.

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Pakistan, the country where crime happens very often.

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Date - 4th October 2016

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2017 at 8:20 PM I feel a littleupset reading this free verse. I hope you are safe every day,and always. I agree with Carol teach them to speak sofly, and carry big sticks. have aniceday my friend.

Carole Duet December 11, 2016 at 12:09 PM I'm so sorry to hear this, Augustus. But, I pray that things will change for the better in your country in the future. In the meantime, teach them to "speak softly and carry a big stick"! Augustus Black December 12, 2016 at 7:11 AM Huge thanks for the comment and for your suggestion, I'm not from Pakistan. I am from USA. Have a nice day. Augustus Black

Anu Nayak October 6, 2016 at 10:48 AM very sad:( hearty congrats on the great win Augustus:)// love, Anu:) Augustus Black October 6, 2016 at 8:23 PM Thanks Anu.

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2016 at 9:48 PM OH MY!! That is quite the one liner. BIG congrats for your win. Augustus Black October 5, 2016 at 11:47 PM Thank you, but I am not from Pakistan.

Kai Michael Neumann October 4, 2016 at 5:41 AM Ouch. I live in South Africa and it is not that safe either. But Pakistan is probably much worse. What has become of the world. Many wishes, Kai Augustus Black October 4, 2016 at 6:15 AM Thanks a lot, but I am not Pakistan, I am from U.S.A. Ya! I know how bad place is Pakistan to live. Excessive crime really. Thanks for comment.