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I live where reaching home safely for girls is a great success. ___________________________________________________ Pakistan, the country where crime happens very often. Sponsored by: Silent One Date - 4th October 2016

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Date: 9/7/2017 8:20:00 PM
I feel a littleupset reading this free verse. I hope you are safe every day,and always. I agree with Carol teach them to speak sofly, and carry big sticks. have aniceday my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:09:00 PM
I'm so sorry to hear this, Augustus. But, I pray that things will change for the better in your country in the future. In the meantime, teach them to "speak softly and carry a big stick"!
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:11:00 AM
Huge thanks for the comment and for your suggestion, I'm not from Pakistan. I am from USA. Have a nice day. Augustus Black
Date: 10/6/2016 10:48:00 AM
very sad:( hearty congrats on the great win Augustus:)// love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thanks Anu.
Date: 10/5/2016 9:48:00 PM
OH MY!! That is quite the one liner. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:47:00 PM
Thank you, but I am not from Pakistan.
Date: 10/4/2016 5:41:00 AM
Ouch. I live in South Africa and it is not that safe either. But Pakistan is probably much worse. What has become of the world. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks a lot, but I am not Pakistan, I am from U.S.A. Ya! I know how bad place is Pakistan to live. Excessive crime really. Thanks for comment.

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