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Where I Carry You

Hurt me, let me carry your scars, marked, feeling your rough hands break past my ribs piercing your way in. Take me by force, claim me, let every thrust shout “Mine! Mine! Mine! Leaving the imprint of your grasp embedded in my hips. Push inside me, till I’m swollen and raw driving out everyone before you, everything in me that’s not you, the wounds, changing me from the inside out. Enter me and stay, tattooed on my flesh, branded and bruised, scarred, under my breast where I carry you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/31/2012 11:24:00 PM
ANN, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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Date: 3/20/2010 2:40:00 PM
EROTIC AND FUNNY---WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP---WISH YOU MUCH INSPIRATION AND SUCCESS HERE AMONG FRIENDS.
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:55:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 3/19/2010 9:10:00 AM
Ann, this poem just oozes passion, sensual moments with a caressing of lust >> excellent read >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:46:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ann. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:23:00 AM
VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP FALESHIA
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:00:00 AM
Love this write Ann - Passion extreme lol - So many great vibrant lines - Fab share for all -:
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:48:00 AM
powerful and gripping - great feel to a great write
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